A geek is in search of the mysterious girl that kissed him on Halloween, but his only clues are her blonde hair...and her pink Converse shoes.
It was to short you have to make more.
By unicorn slime reading lover
Pretty good but to short.
Could have been a bit longer in my opinion.
It was way to short it’s like the author put five minutes and in the title you should probably change it to the girl in the pink converse a short!!! Story
girl in the converse shoes
i liked it but it colud have been a bit longer.
It was good but it could have been.... LONGER
What I Thought
I thought it was not descriptive enough. Maybe just add a little more detail? Also it was just a little predictable, but again I think that was because of lack of detail. Other than that, I liked it, and I think it would make an excellent chapter book.
It's not that interesting tbh
It’s too short but so cute.
the girl in the converse shoes
I enjoyed the concept. I wish that the author would have made the book longer and more detailed.
A cute short story but nothing more. Needs to be longer and more details as everyone else suggests.